Chill wind blew in..
through the half closed window.
slowly, like an intruder!
carrying the essence
of darkness! outside..
The tone, of lifeless waveslapped in my ears.It came in,slowly, slowlywithout any haste.
I laid awake,cuddledby its soft hands.
The wind made the balloonsdance in the air!which laid on the flooras the remnant,of a grand celebration!
I am happy..happier than ever!sudden thoughts creeping over me,of you,who made me 'what I am'!
You helped me,in my troublesas a dutiful friendcared me,when I longed for it,as a loving brother.
It was you,who gave mea hand, at those sad nights,But..I couldn't make you smile!
I learned from you,the true meaning of life..you taught me,thefirst lessons of hard work.And I listened, locked it safe,to achieve a good tomorrow...
But, what happened betweenYou and Me?Love had nothing to do with itneither hate!I looked at the fading Polaroidphotos, andtried to believe they are happening...But, you and me,not happening!
Iterating thoughts..tranquility!!
I still believe,You'll one day, step into my lifelike this cool breezeand take me backto those beautiful days !
Remembering you..
( The italicised stanza is purely et's contribution )
I was wondering that somehow those italicized verses sort of stand apart from the rest of the verses. Got the answer.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful verses. :-)
First off, you found an exact image for the poem :)
ReplyDeleteAnd, the verses are all yours, alice, I only gave you some phrase pointers, which is scattered here and there in the poem. The creativity is all yours! :h
You're doing well!
@ insignia & et :
ReplyDelete:-) :-)